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Describe a third person Dear Christine, I would like to talk about Javier objectively, althought it is difficult for me because he is my best friend and i have known him for a long time. Nevertheless, in the next lines, I will try to be clear and concise about him. He was born in a well-off family and it allowed him to have a good education. He is an intelligent student, in fact he obtained the bachelor with an excellent note, he has a bright brain. However, music and languages were their weak point. In spite of his level, he was to Sidney, last summer, to improve his English. Javier is the oldest brother but he only has a sister, Maria. With her, Javier is a sensitive, responsable and charming brother. He loves her because he has spent a lot of time with Maria due to the work of their parents. As a friend, Javier is shy and sometimes he doesn’t express their feelings but he is always when you need him. He has always good advices for their friends. If I had to highlight an unpopular aspect of him, perhaps, it would be that he is not overly ambitious because he isn’t saucy person. If I were you, I would a person like Javier to spend time with my children. I hope I have helped you and also, I hope to see you soon.

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Describe a third person

Dear Christine,
I would like to talk about Javier objectively, although it is difficult for me because he is my best friend and i have known him for a long time. Nevertheless, in the next few lines, I will try to be clear and concise about him.

He was born in a well-off family and it allowed him to have a good education. He is an intelligent student, in fact he obtained a bachelor degree with an excellent grade. He is very bright. However, music and languages were his weak point. In spite of his good level, he went to Sydney, last summer, to improve his English.

Javier is the oldest brother but he also has a sister called Maria. With her, Javier is a sensitive, responsible and charming brother. He loves her because he has spent a lot of time with Maria due to their parent's work. 

As a friend, Javier is shy and sometimes doesn’t express his feelings well.  But he is always there when you need him and always has good advice for his friends.

If I had to highlight a negative trait of Javier, perhaps it would be that he is not overly ambitious because he seems happy as he is.

If I were you, I would love a person like Javier to spend time with my children.

I hope I have helped you and also, I hope to see you soon.

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