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My favourite food There's nothing better then sitting relaxed on your sofa while eating your favorite healthy food (probably not so healthy). Food is fun, unless you're worried about your shape, health or whatever, you can eat whatever you want. A tipe of food I'm not able to do without is crisps, my favorite are Pringles with paprika, but let's talk about something healthier. I like eating sushi and raw fish, you have to spend a little money if you want to eat a good sushi but it's totally worth it. I like pasta as well, I eat it almost everyday. I've heard some people wandering how possibile it is to eat pasta every day and never get tired of it. Well, it's because you can cook it in millions different ways: with tuna, sauce, speck, salmon, mushrooms...it's like eating different things everyday. I also like pizza, preferably without sauce. In closing, pistachio is just the cerry on top, I like it's taste and I like keeping the shell in my mouth 'till the salty taste disappear.

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My favourite food

There's nothing better than sitting relaxed on your sofa while eating your favorite healthy food (probably not so healthy). Food is fun, unless you're worried about your shape, health or whatever, you can eat whatever you want. A type of food I'm not able to do (i think it is better to say: i"m not able to live without) without is crisps (I think chips would be better, maybe that is something to do with the British accent, I'm not sure), my favorite is Pringles with paprika, but let's talk about something healthier. I like eating sushi and raw fish, you have to spend a little money if you want to eat a good sushi but it's totally worth it. I like pasta as well, I eat it almost everyday. I've heard some people wondering (wandering means walking around) how possible it is (I think it is better to say: how is it possible to eat ... etc.) to eat pasta every day and never get tired of it. Well, it's because you can cook it in millions different ways (I think this phrase is wrong. You can say: in a million  different ways, or you can say: in millions of different ways, the second one sounds better): with tuna, sauce, speck, salmon, mushrooms...it's like eating different things everyday. I also like pizza, preferably without sauce. In closing, pistachio is just the cherry on top, I like it's taste and I like keeping the shell in my mouth 'till the salty taste disappears (the salty taste = it/ until it disappears.)


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My favourite food (favourite = UK; favorite = US)

There's nothing better then sitting relaxed (relaxing) on your sofa while eating your favorite healthy food (or maybe probably not so healthy). Food is fun, and unless you're worried about your shape, health or whatever, you can eat whatever you want. A type of food I'm not able to do without is crisps. (In the US, you'd say "potato chips".) My favorite is are Pringles with paprika ("my favorite" = my favorite type of crisps, singular, so I used "is"), but let's talk about something healthier. I like eating sushi and raw fish. You have to spend a little money if you want to eat a good sushi but it's totally worth it. ("Sushi" is uncountable; you may hear people say "I like a good sushi" but you'd just say "I like good sushi.") I like pasta as well; I eat it almost every day. (Every day = each day; everyday = commonplace.) I've heard some people wondering how it is possible it is to eat pasta every day and never get tired of it. Well, it's because you can cook it in millions of different ways: with tuna, sauce, speck, salmon, mushrooms...it's like eating different things every day. I also like pizza, preferably without sauce. In closing, pistachios are is just the cherry on top of the cake, I like their it's taste and I like keeping the shell in my mouth 'till the salty taste disappears (until I can't taste the salt anymore).

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I'd say "relaxing", although I guess you could lie down and eat crisps all afternoon ;)  

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