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Paper Towns by John Green In first caption Quentin describe his day. He go to school with her mother and talk with his friends every morning. They go early to school for talking. Quentin has two best friends: Ben and Radar. Ben is single and he wants very much go to the prom with a girl (any girl). Radar has a girlfriend named Angela. It's not a secret for his friends that Quentin is crazy in love with Margo. Quentin likes very much his friends, but when he sees Margo the would stop and he just can sees her smile and her eyes. Quentin has a ex-girlfriend and Margo date a guy named Jase. This is the first serious date of Margo. Quentin, Ben and Radar are not popular in school, but Margo is very popular, everyone knows her. The entire school knows stories about Margo's adventuries, like when get out with the circle for three months. There is a guy in school, named Chuck, he is not a good guy and for some reason he stoped to fight with Quentin, Quentin believes that someone said to Chuck to live he alone. But who?

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Paper Towns by John Green

In first caption Quentin describes his day. He goes to school with his mother and talks with his friends every morning. They go to school early  to talk. Quentin has two best friends: Ben and Radar. Ben is single and he really wants go to the prom with a girl (any girl). Radar has a girlfriend named Angela. It's no secret to his friends that Quentin is crazy in love with Margo. Quentin really likes his friends, but when he sees Margo the world stops and he just can see her smile and her eyes. Quentin has an ex-girlfriend and Margo is dating a guy named Jase. He is Margo's first serious boyfriend. Quentin, Ben and Radar are not popular in school, but Margo is very popular,; everyone knows her. The entire school knows stories about Margo's adventures, like when get out with the circle for three months. (I don't understand this.)  There is a guy in school, named Chuck. He is not a good guy and for some reason he started (?) to fight with Quentin. Quentin believes that someone told Chuck to leave him alone. But who?

My observations: Quentin doesn't talk about what happens with his friendship with Margo. They were very close when they were kids, but maybe the episode with the dead guy (they found a dead guy when they were kids) started the end of their friendship. They are very different people.

Nice job, Priscylla! I like John Green's writing. All of this is very understandable. I just changed some verbs so that they would match the person and some words/phrases. Enjoy your book!
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