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Outdated articles When I was firstly aware of outdated articles was in my English class.we learnt an article which named"When MTV Goes CEO" and my english teacher told us that the article aimed at described Gen Xers from bron to get job,and the different career,life style from their parents .That's amazing,we are later Gen Yers,the article maybe will more attractive if it tell about our generation.Not unexpectedly,this essay wrote before 20 years.I I don't understand that whether english essays which teach from english teacher or the english theses which we quote in our papers both are outdated articles.

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Outdated articles

When I was first made aware of outdated articles that were in my English class.We learnt about an article which was  called named"When MTV Goes CEO" and my English teacher told us that the article aimed at described Gen Xers from bron (do you mean from birth) to getting a job,and the different careera , and life styles from their parents .That's amazing,we are later Gen Yers,the article maybe will more attractive(you could also say appealing or relevant)  if it tell talked about our generation.Not unexpectedly,this essay wrote before 20 years.I was written 20 years earlier(or 20 years ago)
I don't understand that whether english essays which teach from english teacher or the english theses which we quote in our papers both are outdated articles.For the last sentence are you trying to write "I don't understand why the English essays which the teacher gives us and the English thesis we quote in our papers are both from outdated articles.
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Outdated Articles

When I was firstly aware of outdated articles was in my English class.we learnt an article which named"When MTV Goes CEO" and my english teacher told us that the article aimed at described Gen Xers from bron to get job,and the different career,life style from their parents .That's amazing,we are later Gen Yers,the article maybe will more attractive if it tell about our generation.Not unexpectedly,this essay wrote before 20 years.I
I don't understand that whether english essays which teach from english teacher or the english theses which we quote in our papers both are outdated articles.


Good job. The grammar was a bit awkward so I rewrote it to sound more natural. 

The first time I became aware of the outdated articles being used in my English class was when we read an article called "When MTV goes CEO". My English teacher told us that it was aimed at Generation Xers, who wanted to find a career and lifestyle different from that of their parents. Its amazing how outdated that article was, we are Generation Yers and we would be much better if we could read something relevant to our own generation. Unsurprisingly, this article was written more than 20 years ago! 

(I'm not sure what the last sentence is trying to say, can you try to write it again and I'll help you correct it?)

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