Please help with proof reading my cover letter thanks :) Any suggestions are highly welcome! Dear Sir/Madam; I am writing to express my interest in the recently advertised “--------” role on -----. At this time in my career, I am looking for new challenges and an opportunity to use my administration skills in your department. With reference to the qualifications described in the advertisement, you will see from the enclosed resume that I have: • Six years expertise in coordinating administrative work across different sectors, with increasing levels of responsibility. • Computer training and experience using Microsoft office package. • Business administration bachelor degree. In addition, I have strong communication and organisation skills; a commitment to providing excellent client service, strong attention to details. I am able to work independently and within a team environment. These experiences were gained from four years’ work in a five star hotel in the banqueting department, two years’ work in a retail shop, two years’ work at an event planning company, and work in a private hospital. My educational background in Business and Human Resource taught me how to think critically about support for a business operation. I took information systems papers at university so as to develop good MS office and database skills. My friends and colleagues describe me as being a diligent, loyal, fun and responsible person. I speak a second language (Mandarin Chinese); this will assist me in developing potential business partners and clients. I believe that my skills and personal qualities would be a great match for the organisation. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss my qualifications. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely,