Today was a day of coffee
Today was a special day.. My friends Ale, Caty , Alma and me were in Ale's House ours best friend, we drunk coffe and eaten cookies .. We were having a conversation when suddenly Caty's daughter fall on the floor the baby girl was craying and we taked an ice and put it on her head .. Fortunately it was only a scare.
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Today was a day of coffee
Today was a special day.. My friends Ale, Caty , Alma and me were in Ale's House ours best friend, we drank coffee and ate cookies .. We were having a conversation when suddenly Caty's daughter fall on the floor the baby girl was craying and we took some ice and put it on her head .. Fortunately it was only a scare.Thanks for reading this.
-Well done, I'm glad she was ok!
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1. My friends Ale, Caty , Alma and me and I were in Ale's House...
2. She is our ( not ours) best friend.
Also you can write it like: "My friends, Ale, Caty, Alma and I were in Ale's house (who is our best friend)"
I just wanted to add these small corrections to the corrections of the others below me.
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Today was a day of coffee
Today was a special day.. My friends Ale, Caty , Alma and me were in Ale's House. She is ours best friend. We drank coffee and ate cookies .. We were having a conversation when suddenly Caty's daughter fell on the floor. The baby girl was crying and we taked took some an ice and put it on her head .. Fortunately she was not hurt,it was only a scare.Thanks for reading my paragraph.
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