This day
It was a rainy day. I walked along the street to the shop, drops fell to my umbrella and did calming sounds. The stream ran down the roads. The air was so fresh, like in the forest. Then I took a deep breath and felt sweet relief in the whole my body. I liked it. I looked around and felt as if everything was connected to each other like in one big live picture.The houses, people, cars, trees, cats. It seemed the rain unite all things together and I felt myself like a part of something bigger. I stopped for this magic moment then fell with one foot to the puddle and continued my way.
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This day
It was a rainy day. As I walked along the street to the shop, drops fell on my umbrella and made calming sounds. A stream ran down the roads. The air was so fresh, like in the forest. Then I took a deep breath and felt sweet relief in my whole body. I liked it. I looked around and felt as if everything was connected to each other like in one big live picture.The houses, people, cars, trees, and cats. It seemed that the rain united all things together and I felt myself like a part of something bigger. I stopped for this magic moment then put with one foot in a puddle and continued on my way.1
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Great job! It sounds like a wonderful day. :)
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I love rainy days, sometimes. The sound of rain falling on a tin roof is one of the best sounds.
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I get these feelings while it's raining
The drops' music is awesome and the smell of wet earth is irresistible
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That's nice :) I like sunny days too, just feel myself more like "man of the rain" haha
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