My dream
Hello,everyone.I have a dream that one day,I can become an outstanding traditional Chinese medicine doctor, to bring health to people all over the world. In order to realize my dream, I was reciting and learning a very classic medical books named"Huangdi Nei Jing", I can recite many chapers fluently. When I grow up a little older, I will learn how to acupuncture. I know there are so many people can not afford expensive drugs in backward areas of the world, I can use simple and easy acupuncture for their treatment. Meanwhile, if I want to be a doctor who can help the global patient, using English freely is essential. So please choose me! Please give me this chance to learn English better. And I will help more and more people in the future.Thank you!
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My dream
Hello everyone. I have a dream that, one day, I can become an outstanding doctor of traditional Chinese medicine doctor, in order to bring health to people all over the world. In order to realize my dream, I have been reciting and learning a very classic medical books named "Huangdi Nei Jing". I can recite many chapters fluently. When I get a little older, I will learn how to do acupuncture. I know there are so many people in backward areas of the world who cannot afford expensive drugs in backward areas of the world. I can use simple and easy acupuncture for their treatment. Meanwhile, if I want to be a doctor who can help the global patients, using English freely is essential. So please choose me! Please give me this chance to learn English better. And I will help more and more people in the future. Thank you!I have made a few changes, but one thing you should remember is that if you use . or , the space goes after and not before.
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