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The spring's aromas In the warm, sunny day Susan and Michael were sitting on the bench in the park. The apple trees and lilac were blooming. There was strong, astonishing aroma in the air. Susan was looking around at the all beauty and enjoyed this lovely day. She feels so happy that she wanted just to skip all the way across the park. Then she stood up and invited Michael to her joyful mood with a gentle gesture of her hand. However, Michael was staring at his phone and didn’t notice anything. He was like a frozen statue, only a few fingers were doing strange movements on the screen surface. Susan dropped her hand back and a cunning smile appeared on her face. Then suddenly she snatched the phone from the hand of Michael, run away to the glade full of dandelions and chortled. Next, she threw the phone aside and yelled: “Fetch!”. After few seconds of shock, Michael widely smiled, spring out and chased after Susan. They stumbled, fell down to the grass and loudly laughed and started to throw flowers to each other. Somewhere the phone was resentfully beeping while the aromas of blooming spring were mixing with sincere happiness and love.

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The spring's aromas

In the One warm and sunny day, Susan and Michael were sitting on a the bench in a the park. The apple trees and lilacs in the park were blooming. There was an strong, astonishingly strong aroma in the air. Susan was sitting there admiring the natural beauty of the whole place.looking around at the all beauty She was really enjoying herself that and enjoyed this lovely day. She felt feels so happy that all she wanted was just to skip right all the way across the park. Then So, she stood up, but, before that, she wanted Michael to join her so they could share the joy together. and invited Michael to her joyful mood With a gentle gesture of her hand, she signalled her intention to Michael. However, Michael he was staring at his phone at that moment, so he and didn’t notice her doing that. anything. He was like a frozen statue, with only a few of his fingers moving, when he did some strange finger movements on the screen of his phone. surface. Susan dropped her hand back down, and a mischievous cunning smile soon appeared on her face. Then she suddenly she snatched his the phone from his hand the hand of Michael, run and ran away with it towards a  to the glade full of dandelions, chortling as she ran .and chortled. Next, Later, she threw the phone aside and yelled, “Fetch!” After few seconds of shock, Startled for a few seconds by what he had just witnessed, Michael soon broke into a broad  smile, widely smiled, spring sprang out of the bench  and chased after her/Susan. They stumbled, fell down onto the grass and started laughing loudly, after which  they started throwing laughed and started to throw flowers at to each other. Somewhere, the phone continued to lie, beeping for attention, as/while resentfully beeping while the aromas of blooming spring enveloped both of them in complete were mixing with sincere happiness and love.

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