Return goods
I bought a clothes online.I was very unsatisfied with this clothes .Because its quality is bad and color is too dark（the first one） .There are some differences than pictures online（the second one）. That's one pitfalls of buying online.
In the end ，I spent 10 yuan sending it to the seller.After the seller receives it，she will bear half of the freight .It was a good decision that I returned of goods .This thing enlightens me that I need to be more cautious when I buy something online.
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Return goods
I bought some a clothes online. I was very unsatisfied with them, this clothes .because the its quality was bad and the color (colour in UK Eng) was too dark（the first one）?? . They are different to/from theThere are some differences than pictures online（the second one??）. That's one of the pitfalls of buying online.In the end ，I spent 10 Yuan sending it back to the seller. After the seller receives it she will bear half of the freight costs. It was a good decision to return the that I returned of goods. This has enlightened thing enlightens me to be that I need to be more cautious when I buying something online.
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Returning goods
I bought a clothes online .I was very unsatisfied with these clothes because the quality is bad and color is too dark（the first one）.There are some differences from the pictures online（the second one）. That is one of the pitfalls of buying online.In the end, I spent 10 yuan sending it to the seller. After the seller receives it，she will bear half of the freight cost .It was a good decision to return the goods .This situation shows me that I need to be more cautious when I buy something online.
Great job! A few grammatical errors, but the main thing is that you convey the meaning clearly. I always think that the main aim when learning a language should be to communicate - grammar and lack of mistakes comes after!
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