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Traffic Problems in Metro Cities Traffic is problem which generally take place in square of in metro city. Traffic is also a reason for air-pollution. Due to the fact that the fume spread and change quantity air on the sky. The main factories of traffic; Break the rules and less awarness of sense of responsible grade. Actually break the rules is about education and self-confident. Because of most people learn the rules and know it is neccessity for possitive life. At the same time the government have to establish serious fine and apply the control whether its occuring or not. When we have checked up on this awarness of sense of responsible grade, driver behavior give us an idea for instance while traffic warden is no the street or avenue driver generally break the rules. There are lots of example about this. In this situation the main mistake the people dont follow up the rules and playing down its rules. To sum up traffic is one of the most i portant problem in metro cities, hovewer, there is more imprtant case that society awarness. If we take care of our system and renew it head towards positive point. We can eracted this problem.

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Traffic Problems in Metro Cities ((What "traffic" problems besides "air pollution"? Maybe you should rename the title "Air Pollution in Metropolitan Cities"))

Traffic is a problem which generally takes place in the center ((city "square" is usually the city center)) of a metropolitan city. Traffic is also a reason for air pollution ((why hyphenate air-pollution?)) due to the fact that the automobile exhaust ((better word than "fumes")) changes the air quality. The main factories of traffic; Break the rules and less awareness of sense of responsible grade. ((Last sentence does not make sense and I am not sure what you are trying to say))

Actually break the rules is about education and self-confident ((Breaking what rules? Pollution rules? Maybe you want to say "Breaking the rules is about education and self-confidence (i.e. the confidence to break the rules)")). Most people are taught that following the rules is the path to a healthy life. The government should establish serious fines for polluters. ((You said a little more here but I do not fully understand the point you are trying to make.))

When we have checked up on this awareness of sense of responsible grade, driver behavior give us an idea for instance while traffic warden is no the street or avenue driver generally break the rules. There are lots of example about this. In this situation the main mistake the people don't follow up the rules and playing down its rules. ((Do not understand what you are trying to say.))

In summation, traffic is one of the most important problems in metropolitan cities. However, there is more that is important than societal awareness. If we take care of our environment, we can move towards a positive outcome. We can eradicate this problem.

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