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Today is a rainy day and it was a little cold .However,I like this weather that make me feel cozy. In the morning, i went to the students‘ third canteen to eat a quick breakfast with a bread and a bowl of pumpkin porridge.Then, i went to school library to read books.when i about to leave library, it was raining heavily. I rode a sharing bicycle which was placed in front of the gate of the library ,at a high speed to canteen to have lunch with my friend. I was totally wet.After lunch , my friends fetched me up to my dormitory . After a short rest , i went to the new campus of my university to work as RA(research assistant) in the course about the capital . Since i arrived a little earlier, i went to the library to continue reading papers.Then,i had a good time in the new campus’ canteen where food tasted so delicious. It took me half an hour to taking the school bus back to my dormitory after the class was over at 22:00. I am now a little tired .Good night.
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Today is (was )a rainy day as well as it was a little cold .However, I like this weather that (because it) makes me feel cozy. In the morning, I went to the students‘ third canteen to eat a quick breakfast, with a bread and a bowl of pumpkin porridge.Then, I went to (the) school library to read books. When I was about to leave the library, it was raining heavily. I rode a sharing bicycle, which was placed in front of the gate of the library, at a high speed to (the) canteen to have lunch with my friend. I was totally wet. After lunch, my friends fetched (took) me up to my dormitory . After a short rest, I went to the new campus of my university, to work as a RA(research assistant) in the course about the capital . Since I had arrived a little earlier early, I went to the library to continue reading papers.Then, I had a good time in the new campus’ canteen, where the food tasted so delicious. It took me half an hour to of taking on the school bus to get back to my dormitory, after the class was over at 22:00. I am now a little tired.Good night.
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