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A polar bear died of sadness A 21 year-old female polar bear called Szenja unexpected died in the Seaworld Aquatic Park in San Diego, U.S. The death surprised the park carers, who say that the cause of death is still unknowned and it will take severals weeks to find it. However, it is thought that the death is associated to the fact that her partner who lived with her in the zoo, a female polar bear called Snowflake, was moved to other zoo in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Szenja was separeted from her friend the last days of February. After that, she stopped eating and progressively lost energy until she died, just a week ago. Both bears had been together since 1997, when Szenja was moved to US from a zoo in Germany, where she was born. Snowflake was carrried to Pittsburgh with the purpose of being bred by a male polar bear.

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A polar bear died of sadness

A 21 year-old female polar bear called Szenja unexpectedly died in the Seaworld Aquatic Park in San Diego, California, U.S. The death surprised the park carers curators, who say that the cause of death is still unknowned and that it will take severals weeks to find determine it. However, it is thought that the death is associated to with the fact that her partner*who lived with her in the zoo, a female polar bear called Snowflake, was moved to another zoo in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Szenja was separated from her friend the last days at the end of February. After that, she stopped eating, and she progressively lost energy until she died, just a week ago. Both bears had been together since 1997, when Szenja was moved to the US from a zoo in Germany, where she was born. Snowflake was carrried to Pittsburgh with the purpose of being bred by a male polar bea

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A polar bear died of sadness

A 21 year-old female polar bear called Szenja unexpectedly died in the Seaworld Aquatic Park in San Diego, U.S. The death surprised the park care takers, who say that the cause of death is still unknown and it will take several weeks to find it. However, it is thought that the death is associated to the fact that her partner who lived with her in the zoo, a female polar bear called Snowflake, was moved to another zoo in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Szenja was separated from her friend during the last days of February. After that, she stopped eating and progressively lost energy until she died, just a week ago. Both bears had been together since 1997, when Szenja was moved to US from a zoo in Germany, where she was born. Snowflake was carried to Pittsburgh with the purpose of being bred by a male polar bear.


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