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My first poem I don't what title would be perfect for this poem, if anyone has an idea, feel free to tell me! I met him in the Autumn when the litter was blown away by the wind though he flourished like a blossom tree. Maybe i judged his youth and madness so fast but i didn't judge my own immaturity. My pride and arrogance were huge but he overcomed it with his pure love. With time i even got to know how to breathe without him,waking up new feelings and sensations,he made me feel special. Who love more? I still don't know the answer. I lost him because i wanted it It was my choice I am the only guilty of my own unhappiness. I was afraid of losing myself when i loved him.

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My first poem

I don't what title would be perfect for this poem, if anyone has an idea, feel free to tell me!

 

Love lost


I met him in the Autumn when the leaves were blown by the wind.

But he flourished like a blossoming tree.
Maybe I judged his youth and madness too fast, but I didn't judge my own immaturity.
My pride and arrogance were huge, but he overcame this with his pure love.
With time, I even got to know how to breathe without him, waking up with new feelings and sensations; he made me feel special.
Who loved who more?
I still don't know the answer.
I lost him because I wanted it.
It was my choice.
I am the only one guilty of causing my own unhappiness.
I was afraid of losing myself when I loved him.

 

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