I wouldn't worry too much. This paragraph was very good. The one thing you kept doing wrong was not using a capital "i" when it is a single word, such as "I am very happy". If the letter "i" is on it's own in a sentence, it must always be a capital. You also must capitalise place names, such as England and Spain, as well as names of people, like Ashley. I would also avoid using more than one exclamation mark (!). Using more than one is fine if you were texting your friends or something, but you should avoid using more than one when you are trying to sound more professional, such as in a workplace or in letters and emails. On this website it should be ok, but I thought I would point it out just in case. Either way, very good job.