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New technology and you. I think technology influences our world lots of. Because a lot of things that were made before by hands, now can by a computer. For me, health technology is very interesting because it can help people chance their life and help them have a better lifestyle. We need to learn about how health can help us to be our healthiest, but also we need to make sure that we aren’t injured by technology. Marketing can influences us to buy some things that we don’t need by making us think we can't live without those things, like some household that can harm you, your family and the environment. Lots of people are living happily without technology. How they do it? They have learned to love simple things, nature, to share all their blessings with their neighbors. I don’t think people without goals are OK. But if you would like to obtain what you want, it’s best if you help to others to be better. I think we need to learn to be greenest people with our environment, our world needs us.

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New technology and you.

(I think the) Technology influences our world alots of. Because lots of Many things that you made before with your hands, now a computer can make for you.(I would probably say, 'many things that were made by-hand are now made by a computer.' It would sound more natural.)  For me, is very interesting health technology is very interesting because it can help people change ing their life and help them to have a better style of lifestyle. We need to learn about how health can help us to be our life easiesthealthiest, but also we need to take care of make sure that we are not injured our life with the by technology. because Marketing can influences us to buy anythings that you we don’t need to have, but they make think you need it to can live by making us think we can't live without those things. Lots of people are living happily without technology.  How they do it? They have learned to love simple things, nature, to share all their blessings with their neighbors all their blessings. I don’t think people without goals are OK. But if you would like to obtain that what you want, it is best if you help to others to be better. I think we need to learn to be greenest (not sure what you mean by "greenest people") people, own our world needs us.

Really nice job! And I agree with what you said. Much of your writing was grammatically correct, so I edited it to sound more natural. And I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what you meant by 'greenest people.'

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