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I am writing to you about your course. (I assume you are referring to your age now --> present tense) I am was16 years old and I want to improve my memory skills. I think it can help me remember more details, things and happy moments in my life. due to this course Perhaps I will be better in my future job or in University due to this course. From my point of view, it is really amazing when you can describe people your life style (I am not very sure what you mean. I am guessing that you meant: "......it is really amazing when you can remember everyone whom I have corresponded with in my life.I strongly believe that this course will help me to do it.

When I read Your advertisement in the street you wrote claims that to enhance memory we need to go spend over ten weeks to ehance our memory and I cannot understand how it works. It is **Is it true or not ? Have you experience and good results before this day ? (I assume you want to ask if there is any proof that this course works. "Are there any testimonials from previous course participants and how much have their memory skills improved after attending your course?")

** When we transform a statement to a question, we invert the position of the verb and the pronoun.

Eg It (Pronoun) is (verb) true. [statement]  /  Is (verb) it (pronoun) true? [question]

Begin from when you will work and on what days ?   (What is the commencement date of the course and on which days of the week will I attend your lesson?)
I hope you will answer in my all the questions !  look forward to your reply.

Your faithfully,

Aziza.

Hope this helps.

Cheers, Lance

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