I can't wait tomorrow! Usually one of my kids comes home at 1pm. Tomorrow she will come home at 5pm because there's an outing event in the kindergarten. So I will enjoy afternoon tea. I haven't had af

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Kiyoko

I can't wait tomorrow! Usually one of my kids comes home at 1pm. Tomorrow she will come home at 5pm because there's an outing event in the kindergarten. So I will enjoy afternoon tea. I haven't had afternoon tea for a long time. I'm looking forward to have it!

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I can't wait for tomorrow!

Usually, one of my kids comes home at 1pm. Tomorrow, she will come home at 5pm because there's an outing for kindergartners. So. I will enjoy an afternoon tea. I haven't had an afternoon tea for a long time. I'm looking forward to it!

Nice writing! You used verbs and nouns correctly. I noticed that the use of articles and punctuation were your errors.

Ms. Morgan

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