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But, as required, I sent over my resume and two samples of writing. I applied mainly out of curiosity (and because – let’s face it – I am the queen of sarcasm). Much to my surprise, I was hired on the spot. And very quickly, my inbox was flooded with paparazzi pictures.
Writing for a tabloid was never something I bragged about. I was too afraid my fellow students – and my father, who is an academic – would make fun of me. But this experience taught me a lot of things, both professionally and personally.
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Are these sentences correct? Thank you so much for your help!
But, as required, I sent over my resume and two samples of writing. I applied mainly out of curiosity (and because – let’s face it – I am the queen of sarcasm). Much to my surprise, I was hired on the spot. And very quickly, my inbox was flooded with paparazzi pictures.Writing for a tabloid was never something I bragged about. I was too afraid my fellow students – and my father, who is an academic – would make fun of me. But this experience taught me a lot of things, both professionally and personally.
1. Writing for a tabloid was something that I had never bragged about.
2. I was too afraid that my ...
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This is nicely written and perfectly correct. You can probably delete the opening "but", unless you need it to connect to a previous paragraph.
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