About the precious thing
I never get bored. I believe, it s because I never have time for that. I mean, boredom comes to the person who has a lot of spare time, but has no idea what to do with that time. We can call such person “lucky”, because time – it s the most precious thing one can have.
I think, my days go too quickly, even if I don’t have to work on those days, there are always a lot of things for keeping me busy.
It s a bit scaring, when you realize you can’t remember exactly what you were doing yesterday or three days ago – because you have done too much, I suppose. And my main fear – to spend my time on people, who doesn’t deserve that... Because one friend of mine has told me :"Our time is the greatest gift we can present to the other person”.
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About a precious thing.
I never get bored. I believe/guess it s because I never have the time for that. I mean, boredom mostly comes to a /the person who has a lot of spare time, but has no idea what to do with the time. We can consider /call / such a person “lucky”, because time, as we know it,I think the days are passing by me
It's a bit scary when you realize that you can’t remember exactly what you did
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About the precious thing
I never get bored. I believe, it's because I never have time for that. I mean, boredom comes to the person who has a lot of spare time, but has no idea what to do with that time. We can call such person “lucky”, because time – it's the most precious thing one can have.I think, my days go too quickly (I think it's better to say "my day goes too quickly" so as to imply that you have many tasks during a single day. "My days go too quickly" implies that your days finish quickly), even if I don’t have to work on those days, there are always a lot of things for keeping me busy (I think it's better to say "which keep me busy" instead of "for keeping me busy").
It s a bit scaring scary when you realize you can’t remember exactly what you were doing yesterday or three days ago – because you have done too much, I suppose. And my main fear is to spend my time on people, who doesn’t deserve that it... Because one friend of mine has told me :"Our time is the greatest gift we can present to the other person”.
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Well written & completely agree with your friend said! Just one advice - don't use too many commas ( , ) while writing. You can break a big sentence into two or use conjunction (And, or , however,yet,although,notwithstanding etc etc) to make your writing "sound" more English.
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