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Why It Is Unwise to Jump to Conclusions upon Seeing or Hearing something Nowadays, we live in the exploding information and would like to look at conclusions directly rather than to analysis the procedures of affair, because we are busy and get angry easily in faster life. I think the behavior is not wise and always puts ourselves in the fake news so that we make wrong decisions in final. As the computer technology has developed for many years sharply, we receive much of different information and news on the internet、newspaper and TV every day. People often scan the headlines and conclusions. When they watch the terrible news. For example, “a policeman shot an African American in front of the supermarket”, the African-American can get angry immediately and complain that the policeman in American are all evil and should go to hell. Because they think the policeman deliberately killed their countrymen randomly without according to the laws and constitution. But, in fact, the black man robbed a jewelry and violently versus to the policeman who was trying to stop him. From the story above, we learn that our eyes are blinded easily if just jump to conclusions without considering the process upon seeing and hearing something. When we see some news no matter when and where we are, please do not forget to think of affairs and use your brain to recognize and reason who’s right or wrong. Then you can keep balance and become more and more brilliant and wisdom just like intellectual people. (please help me pick out the mistakes that I made and correct it, by the way please give me some advise according to the level of my essay.Thank you so much)

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