Dairy 1: I am a English learner~~~
Hello, I am very happy to find this learn community in many similar websites~~
I want to exercise my narrative competence~~
From now on, I will write something randomly, maybe about my city, my life and so on.
I lived in a little city near Beijing, China, if you go to my city by high speed rail from Beijing, it just takes 20 minutes.
Toady is the first day of the week, I don't want to wake up in the morning~~
We always feel that the weekend(actually two days) is short, I just want to rest, but it looks like all things we cannot do on workdays were arranged in this two days ☺.
The weather in my city is good now, the trees begin to change green and many kinds of flowers begin to blow, it is a good season for spring outing~~~ Everything begins to wake up.
This all what I want to say in the first day~
Sussi Zhang
April 10th, 2017
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Dairy 1: I am an English learner.
Hello, I am very happy to find this learning community. I want to practice my writing. So from now on, I will write something randomly, maybe about my city, my life and so on.
I come from a little city near Beijing, China. (The word "lived" implies you once lived there but no longer do so - if this is your home town where you were born, you could say "My home-town is a little city near Beijing", and then if you like, describe whether you still live there or where you are now). If you travel to my city by high speed rail from Beijing, it takes just 20 minutes.
Today is the first day of the week, I didn't want to wake up this morning. We always feel that the weekend (two days) is too short. I just want to rest, but it looks like all the things we cannot do on workdays were arranged in these two days ☺.
The weather in my city is good now, the tree leaves have begun to turn green and many kinds of flowers have begun to bloom. It is a good season for a Spring outing - everything has begun to wake up.
This is all that I want to say on the first day.
Sussi Zhang
April 10th, 2017
Note - You used the symbol ~~~ a lot, but I don't know what it means, it is not a typical grammatical symbol in English.
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