Saturday Fair
Today I went to the organic products fair. In truth every Saturday I go in this fair. There I bought banana, strawberry, lettuce, cabbage, parsley, broccoli and even breads . I like to go there very much, not only by existents products but too by people. I love to see people talking, negotiating and living your lifes. After all, life is in the small things. And going the fair does part from these small things.
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Saturday Fair
Today, I went to the Organic Products Fair (Name of a specific fair -- capitalise the first letter) In fact, I go to this fair every Saturday. There, I bought bananas, strawberries, lettuce, cabbage, parsley, broccoli and even bread. I like to go there very much, not only by existents to buy the produce, but also to meet people. (We use "not only".... "but also" to join two supporting ideas together in a sentence) I love to see people talking, negotiating and living your their (You are referring to other people-- use third person pronoun "their") lives (some plural nouns have "ves" when they are changed from singular nouns. Eg thief--> thieves.). After all, life is in revolves around the small things and going to the fair does is part from of these small things.Hope this helps.
Cheers, Lance
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Saturday Fair
Today I went to the organic products fair. In truth every Saturday I go to this fair. There I bought banana, strawberry, lettuce, cabbage, parsley, broccoli and even breads . I like to go there very much, not only to buy existents existing products but too by meet people. I love to see people talking, negotiating and living your their lifes lives. After all, life is in about the small things, and going to the fair does is one from of these small things.Nice structure of sentences, just a few small errors with possessives and grammar..... well done!
All the best from Phil MQ - Native English Speaking Community Tutor
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