What do you think about the independence of Catalonia?
Nowdays the independence of Catalonia is a much discussed subject that people aren't aware of its possible bad consquences. I strongly believe that its independence would be a disadventage for Catalonia and Spain.
Many Catalans feel as Spanish as I do, therefore separating from the country would be a social problem because we would be take away the nacionality of a lots people who want to continue living in Catalonia.
What's more it would suppose a big cultural and economic lost. On the one hand Spain would lost, for example the Sacred Family Cathedral, a lot of tourism... And on the other hand Catalonia would lost commerce with the rest of Spain, the euro, the advantages of being in the European Union, etc.
In conclusion, I wouldn't like that Catalonia get independece because it's a beautiful autonomous community and I love its culture and language. And as far as I'm concerned, it would become a personal problem because I have family and friends there and maybe it would be harder to visit them.
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What do you think about the independence of Catalonia?
Nowdays Nowadays the independence of Catalonia is a much discussed subject that people aren't aware of its possible bad consequences. consquences. I strongly believe that its independence would be a disadvantage disadventage for Catalonia and Spain.Many Catalans feel as Spanish as I do, therefore separating from the country would be a social problem because we would be taking take away the nationality nacionality of a lots people who want to continue living in Catalonia.
What's more it would be suppose a big cultural and economic lost. On the one hand, Spain would lose lost, for example the Sacred Family Cathedral, a lot of tourism... And on the other hand, Catalonia would lose lost commerce with the rest of Spain, the euro, the advantages of being in the European Union, etc.
In conclusion, I wouldn't like for that Catalonia to get independence independece because it's a beautiful autonomous community and I love its culture and language. And as far as I'm concerned, it would become a personal problem because I have family and friends there and maybe it would be harder to visit them.
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What do you think about the independence of Catalonia?
Nowdays the independence of Catalonia is a much discussed subject that people aren't aware of its possible bad consequences.la gramatica esta bien pero las ideas expresados no son vinculados por "that". ....is a much discussed subject but despite that (being much discussed), I still believe some people are not aware of its possible bad consequences.
I strongly believe that its independence would be a disadvantage for Catalonia and Spain. its independence would be disadvantageous for...
Many Catalans feel as Spanish as I do, therefore separating from the country would be a social problem because we would be take away the nationality of a lots people who want to continue living in Catalonia.
What's more it could be a big cultural and economic loss. On the one hand Spain would lose, for example the Sacred Family Cathedral, a lot of tourism... And on the other hand Catalonia would lose commerce with the rest of Spain, the euro, the advantages of being in the European Union, etc.
In conclusion, I wouldn't like for Catalonia to become independent because it's a beautiful autonomous community and I love its culture and language. And as far as I'm concerned, it would become a personal problem because I have family and friends there and maybe it would be harder to visit them.
"I wouldn't like that Catalonia become independent" es possible decir asi--la gramatica es correcta (como es lo usual en espanol) pero en ingles es raro.
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But it's different because Spain and Catalonia are smaller than Canada and EEUU...
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obviamente, no me importa lo que sucede en espana; la gente necesita elegir. Por lo general, para mi, naciones se han convertidos en entes demasiado grandes para reflejar la voluntad de la gente. Todavia, el paso de independizarse es muy grande y los costos verdaderos son problamente mas altos de lo que se den cuenta. Por ejemplo, quien paga el ejercito etc? Catalonia espera que OTAN la protega? Catalonia tiene solamente un ejercito muy pequeno? Mi consejo: vaya por ello pero vaya muy despacio; no estes emocianados. Por ultimo, tal vez, Catalonia cambia su mente. Creo que Catalonia y Espana serian come los EEUU y Canada. Somos Buenos vecinos, no?
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