My thoughts about my country.
Brazil, South America, It's a good place when it comes to spending your holidays but do You think it is a good place to live, grow up a child, build up a family? I live in Rio de Janeiro, and I find it very stressful and dangerous to live here, our people isn't that civilized and in my opinion our laws are too weak, too lax so people don't respect it. Even tough I love my country, our people and the place where I live, I'd like to build a family somewhere else.
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My thoughts about my country.
Brazil, South America It's is a good place when it comes to spending your holidays, but do You you think it is a good place to live, grow up a child, build up a family? I live in Rio de Janeiro, and I find it very stressful and dangerous to live here. Our people isn't aren't that civilized and in my opinion our laws are too weak, too lax so people don't respect it them. Even tough though I love my country, our people and the place where I live, I'd like to build a family somewhere else.0
Reading again I realised that it's okay "our people isn't" ..I think you want to say "all people here - a group of people" or "our population- all the men, women and children".
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Hi Igor.
I'm brazilian too and you did very well!!
I suggest you to have a look at "our people isn't that civilized" instead of isn't you should use aren't.
Congrats for your text!!
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