My boy where are you
Today ,l would like to talk about my ideal type boyfriend. Buy the way, what do you think of chinese man ?
Um,There is no doubt that they are very gentle and faithful .But l like someone who is taller than me at least 15cm . He is interested in playing the piano or playing basketball. Although l don't like studying too much , l want to read books with him.
I don't think handsome boys are the best .people's inner beauty is the most attractive. Where are you ? I want to meet someone who has the inner beauty and let me can't help saying “love you once ,l love you twice ,l love you more than beans and rice…”
My boy where are you ?
（Hoping you guys correct my composition and if you don't mind can you add some beautiful stenences in it . Thank you all）
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My boy where are you
Today, l would like to talk about my ideal boyfriend. By the way, what do you think of Chinese men? Um,There is no doubt that they are very gentle and faithful. But l like someone who is at least 15cm taller than me. He is interested in playing the piano or playing basketball. Although l don't like studying too much, l want to read books with him.I don't think handsome boys are the best, people's inner beauty is the most attractive. Where are you ? I want to meet someone who has inner beauty and for who I can't help saying “love you once, l love you twice, l love you more than beans and rice…”
My boy where are you?
（Hoping you guys correct my composition and if you don't mind can you add some beautiful sentences to it . Thank you all）
Hello Zengqin,
You don't need many corrections to your text. The most important thing is to remember to put spaces after commas and full stops (periods) and not before.
I am sure that you will find your boy, probably when you least expect. Just never give up hope.
Best wishes
Bob
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