writing exercise for IELTS
A swarm of people holds that many governments due to has not enough notice in citizens' diet triggering massive healthy problems. Others, whereas, argue that it is a matter with individuals instead of governments. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyzes both sides before presenting my personal perspective.
There is no doubt that nobody can understand your body condition deeper than you. Naturally, we must take the responsibility for our diet and health. In order to get a nice figure and keep active so it is essential to get away with junk food as far as you can and meanwhile calculate your calorie intake in one day. All of these are your own business unless you hire a private dietitian.
However, sometimes we don't have plentiful chooses and are cheated on fake and shoddy products on account of food market are not in well supervise. We are facing a large number of severe food scandals. It is logical and obligatory for governments to take actions to protect our rights and health. Hold those food counterfeiters responsible accountable and bring them to justice only be completed by governments. In addition, eating too much sugar, salt and fat is the main resource of the health problem and hence it is wise that governments could regulate the ingredients of such food.
From what has previously well stated, my point of view can be generated that individuals should highly cooperate with the government in the process of pursuing health. What contribute to a person become a dynamic are ample activities and variety nourishment, however all of these are based on the well regulated of government. The ultimate goal of a person which is to be wholesome cannot be achieved without either one of these.
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