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Passenger Part 4? That guy is Jim Preston, played by Chris Pratt. Because of waking up alone, he thought that he was lucky. But time after time, he realized that it was only him on the spaceship! Nobody has woken up. He tried to wake the captain up. Nah, this is the weakness of this movie. Imagine, he is an engineer; he often uses his logic in doing something. Why didn’t he wake the doctor up? Or maybe another engineer who knows how to repair the capsule? Where is your logic, guy! Instead of waking up the doctor or another engineer (he tried to wake the captain up also, but it was to no avail) he woke a beautiful girl up. So, he experienced some kind of love at first sight at the time he glanced on a capsule with Jennifer Lawrence inside. He started to watch her interview, talking to her image in video and at the end, he took a wrong decision. He cut the cable, made her open her eyes and accompany him. Is that an egoistic behavior? Indeed. If you love somebody, you shouldn’t ‘kill’ them for your own sake. I said so but sometimes talk is cheap, as usual. I might do the same if I were on his shoes.

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Passenger Part 4?

This guy is Jim Preston, played by Chris Pratt. Because he woke up alone, he thought that he was lucky. But time after time, he realized that it was only him on the spaceship! Nobody has woken up. He tried to wake the captain up.
Nah, this is the weakness of this movie. Imagine, he is an engineer; he often uses his logic in doing something. Why didn’t he wake the doctor up? Or maybe another engineer who knows how to repair the capsule? Where is your logic, guy? Instead of waking up the doctor or another engineer (he tried to wake the captain up also, but it was to no avail) he woke a beautiful girl up. So, he experienced some kind of love at first sight at the time he glanced at a capsule with Jennifer Lawrence inside. He started to watch her interview, talking to her image in video and at the end, he made a wrong decision. He cut the cable, made her open her eyes and accompany him. Is that an egoistic behavior? Indeed. If you love somebody, you shouldn’t ‘kill’ them for your own sake. I said so but sometimes talk is cheap, as usual. I might do the same if I were on his shoes.


-Very well-written, only minor edits needed.

-As a man, I think it would be very logical to wake Jennifer Lawrence first :D

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