House. My home is very big. In the ground floor is the kitchen, the living room, and bathroom. In the second floor make four bedroom and the two bathroom and in the attic is the biggest bedroom, there

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Marta

House. My home is very big. In the ground floor is the kitchen, the living room, and bathroom. In the second floor make four bedroom and the two bathroom and in the attic is the biggest bedroom, there are clothes and shoes. I love the spacious attic. I like live here. I live with my parents and my brother. When I arrive at home, they are waiting for me. But my mother orders very much. Iam going to leave my home when I'm 30 years old. While I have to enjoy.

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House.

My house is very big. In the ground floor, we have the kitchen, the living room, and bathroom. The second floor has four bedroom and two bathrooms and in the attic has the biggest bedroom with spaces for clothes and shoes. I love the spacious attic.

I like to live here. I live with my parents and my brother. When I arrive at home, they wait for me. But my mother orders very much. I am going to leave my home when I'm 30 years old. While I have to enjoy (I couldn't figure out what is meant by this).

very well written!

I don't dare to correct anyone, for I'm not a native speaker, but I'd said some sentences differently.

My home (house)

My house is very big. In the ground floor there is a kitchen, a living room and a bathroom. The second floor (Don't you mean the first floor?) is made up of four bedrooms, two bathrooms and the biggest bedroom. And the biggest bedroom, that is full of clothes and shoes, is in the attic. I love the spacious attic.

I like living here. I live with my parents and my brother. When I arrive home, they are waiting for me. But my mother orderds very much. I'm going to leave my home (or move) when I'm 30 years old. Until then I .... (I don't know what do you mean by that - "I have to withstand" or "I'd like to enjoy"?)

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