The romance of Ｓｉｅｂｏｌｄ
Does anyone know Dr Siebold?
He was a famous German doctor in Edo era in Japan.
He came to Japan after he got a doctor's degree as a doctor of Dutch trading house in Nagasaki.
He guradually examine Japanese patients,and became famous for a good doctor.
There, he met a japanese woman,named "Otaki",and fell in love with her.
They had a baby girl "Oine", and lived happily for a while.
However,after 5 years,he was suspected exporting prohibited goods,and was deported by force.
He left his fortune to his Japanese wife and child, but he was very anxious about them.
He sent a lot of letters to them, and they also sent letters to him.
After leaving Japan,Siebold published "Japanese botanical book".
In that book, he wrote about "Asisai" a lot.
He named his favorite flower "Asisai"'s scientific name as "Ｈｙｄｒａｎｇｅａ Ｏｔａｋｕｓａ".
It is said that he named that scientific name after his beloved wife.
I hope I will find someone who will love me like that!
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The romance of Ｓｉｅｂｏｌｄ
He was a famous German doctor in Edo era in Japan.
He came to Japan after obtaining a doctorate degree, later becoming a doctor of a Dutch trading house in Nagasaki.
There, he gradually examined Japanese patients, and soon became famous as a good doctor.
There, he met a japanese woman named "Otaki",and fell in love with her.
They had a baby girl named "Oine", and they lived happily for a while.
However, after 5 years - he was under suspicion of exporting prohibited goods, and was deported by force.
He left his fortune to his family, but he was very anxious for them.
He sent a lot of letters to them, and they also sent letters to him.
After leaving Japan, Siebold published a Japanese botanical book.
In that book, he wrote about "Asisai".
He gave the scientific name of Ｈｙｄｒａｎｇｅａ Ｏｔａｋｕｓａ, after his favourite flower, 'Asisai'.
It is said that he had named the flower after his beloved wife.
I hope I will find someone who will love me like that!
(I also hope you can have an easy-going time learning english and uzbek, and I wish for your success)
Good luck, ganbatte kudasai! :)
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(i am not good at english grammar. some corrections are bellow just as suggestion. )
The romance of Ｓｉｅｂｏｌｄ
He was a famous German doctor in Edo era in Japan.
He came to Japan after he got a doctor's degree as a doctor of Dutch trading house in Nagasaki.
He guradually examine(should be cured?) Japanese patients,and became famous for(as?) a good doctor.(or could be simply as: and became well-known)
There, he met a japanese woman,named "Otaki",and fell in love with her.
They had a baby girl "Oine", and lived happily for a while.
However,after 5 years(5 years later),he was suspected exporting prohibited goods,and was deported by force.
He left his fortune to his Japanese wife and child, but he was very anxious about them.
He sent(wrote) a lot of letters to them, and they also sent letters(wrote) to him.
After leaving Japan,Siebold published "Japanese botanical book".
In that book, he wrote about "Asisai" a lot.
He named his favorite flower "Asisai"'s scientific name as "Ｈｙｄｒａｎｇｅａ Ｏｔａｋｕｓａ".
It is said that he named that scientific name after his beloved wife.
I hope I will find someone who will love me like that!
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