My family Hello My name is Trang. I have a happy family. My family has 4 people:parents, brother and me. My father made furniture. Although he's hot-tempered , irritable but he loves us so much

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My family Hello My name is Trang. I have a happy family. My family has 4 people:parents, brother and me. My father made furniture. Although he's hot-tempered , irritable but he loves us so much. This year he is 50 years old, his health is not as strong as before. My mother is 40 years old and she is at home doing housework. She is cheerful, sociable. My brother is a high school student and I am 21 years old now and I am a university student. I love my family so much Thank you for reading my article

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My family

Hello
My name is Trang. I have a happy family. My family has 4 people:parents, brother and me. My father made (is he still making it? Than it should be "makes") furniture. Although he's hot-tempered , and irritable, but he loves us so much. This year he is 50 years old, and his health is not as strong as before. My mother is 40 years old and she is at home doing housework (this means she is there doing her housework right now. It's better if you say "she is a housewife"). She is cheerful and sociable. My brother is a high school student and I am 21 years old now and I am a university student. I love my family so much
Thank you for reading my article

Good text, just don't forget to use conjunctions, especially "and", so that your sentences would be well connected :)

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