My family
Hi everyone :D
I'm Tiến and today I will talk for you about my family.
My family has 4 people: My father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a worker. He is 45 years old. Although he does not speak much but he is always trusted by everyone. My mother was born in 1975 and now she is 42 years old. she is a farmer. In my eyes, she is the most beautiful woman and I love her so much. My brother is 14 years old. He is a student. We live in Yen Bai city. Finally, I love my family so much.
Thanks for reading ^_^
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My family
Hi everyone :DI'm Tiến and today I will talk to you about my family.
My family has 4 people: My father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a worker. He is 45 years old. Although he does not talk much but he is always trusted by everyone. My mother was born in 1975 and now she is 42 years old. she is a farmer. In my eyes, she is the most beautiful woman and I love her so much. My brother is 14 years old. He is a student. We live in Yen Bai city. Finally, I love my family so much.
Thanks for reading ^_^
The best writing of you ever. Thanks for sharing about your family ^^
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My family
Hi everyone :DI'm Tiến, and today I will talk for (to you) about my family.
My family has 4 people: my father, my mother, my brother and me/myself I. My father is a worker. He is 45 years old. Although he does not speak much *but he is always trusted by everyone. My mother was born in 1975 and now she is 42 years old. She is a farmer. In my eyes, she is the most beautiful woman and I love her so much. My brother is 14 years old. He is a student. We live in Yen Bai city. Finally, I love my family so much.
Thanks for reading ^_^
* you can use either 'although' or 'but' but not both :
Although he does not speak much he is always trusted by everyone.
He does not speak much but he is always trusted by everyone.
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