About my hobby
Hello everybody !
My name is Tung. I am from to Thai Binh. To day i will talk about my hobby. I like playing fotball. I like it sice I Was 10 years old. I like it but I play verry bad. I usually play fotball with my friend in the afternoon. But my hobby stoped when I start working, because my free time is very little. I want to spent a lot of free time on it. Because I think play fotball is very good for health and it also me fell comfortable.
Now please help me by correcting the errors in my paragraph.
Thanks you.
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About my hobby
Hello everybody !My name is Tung. I am from to Thai Binh. Today I will talk about my hobby. I like playing football. I've liked it since I Was 10 years old. I like it but I play verry badly. I usually play football with my friend in the afternoon. But my hobby stopped when I started working, because my free time is very little limited (Or, I don't have much free time). I want to spent a lot of free time on it because I think playing football is very good for health and it also makes me feel great! me fell comfortable.
Now please help me by correcting the errors in my paragraph.
Thanks you.
Hi Tung,
Thanks for sharing your interest in football!
Hope this helps,
Helen.
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About my hobby
Hello everybody !My name is Tung. I am from to Thai Binh. To day I will talk about my hobby. I like playing football. I have liked it since I was 10 years old. I like it but I play it very bad. I usually play football with my friends in the afternoon. But my hobby stopped when I started working, because my free time is very little. I want to spend a lot of free time on it. Because I think playing football is very good for health and it also makes me fell comfortable.
Now please help me by correcting the errors in my paragraph.
Thanks you.
Đã ThankS rồi là còn YOU. Muốn cho tên này một trận bay lộn tùng phèo bây giờ chứ lị
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About my hobby
Hello everybody !My name is Tung. I am from to Thai Binh. To day i will talk about my hobby. I like playing fotball. I like it sice I Was 10 years old. I like it but I play verry bad. I usually play fotball with my friend(s) in the afternoon. But my hobby stop(p)ed when I start(ed) working, because my free time is very little. I want to spenda lot of free time on it. Because I think play football is very good for health and it also makes/hepls me fell comfortable.
Now please help me by correcting the errors in my paragraph.
Thanks you.
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