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Essay (MODERN BUILDINGS) Please correct my composition Nowadays, in many cases, buildings are modern and high-rise architecture. Taking the case of Julia Banks into consideration, she is an architecture, who comes from Bristol and now she works in London. Although since she was a child, she lived in a tower block, in a poor part of Bristol, she explained that now the situation has changed and buildings are built with more much attention. Indeed,the materials used for new buildings have improved and the construction of them are safer than before. Moreover, the most problem could be the suburban as “urban sprawl” because they could extend to the countryside. Furthermore, Julia acting as architecture she thinks that it should be useful design more skyscrapers for city centres because they could offer a lot of facilities, shops for everyone. The last aspect, but not the least is about the pollution owing to traffic indeed, people are unhappy for their health and most London residents would be willing to do without a car in order to reduce the pollution in the city and to live better. For ought, I understand, Julia could be a good architecture for the future of city centres because, she would be able to plan buildings, which offer more leisure facilities and more opportunities to keep everything on hand when we want.

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