my family
my family was a big family including my grandpa ,grandma,mom ,dad and me in the past but now there are just 3 people in my family,dad ,mom and me.my grandma and grandma used to be my closest relatives and best friends before they died when i were in junior school.they are very kind and patient to me.they can fullfil all my dreams .and i love them so much.however they died because of dangerous disasters and my life lost its color and engergy from then.i didnt smile for a long time.i cant imagine how i spent that time. -_-
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my family
my family was a big family including my grandpa ,grandma,mom ,dad and me in the past but now there are just 3 people in my family,dad ,mom and me.my grandparents used to be my closest relatives and best friends for me..before they died when i were in junior school, they were very kind and patient to me.they could make all my dreams true and i love them so much.however they died because of dangerous disasters ,my life lost its color and energy from then.i didn t smile for a long time.i can t imagine how i spent that time. -_-
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i understand u ..when my grandmother died last year my life had become empty ..she was too important for me...i used spend with her more time than with my eltern......
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