My first composition
I an a lighting sales. Today,i met a wonderful thing.A sample lost in the company's showroom. The boss questioned every employ that her say give everybody one opportunity.Or i'm going to check.Finally found another boss took away.
What do you think about this?
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My first composition
I am a lighting sales person. Today, I encountered a peculiar / interesting incident (I would not really describe it as wonderful, which has very positive connotations). A product sample from the company's showroom was lost. The boss questioned every employee about the loss, saying she would give everyone one opportunity to confess, or she would check people's bags. (I guess she said she would check bags (or offices) as its not specified)Finally, she found that another boss had taken the sample away.What do you think about this?
I think I'm glad I don't have a boss like yours!
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My first composition
I am a lighting salesperson. Today, an amazing thing happened. A sample went missing from the company's showroom. The boss questioned every employee, saying that everybody would get one chance to speak up about the loss. Meanwhile, I went to search for it. I finally discovered that another boss had taken it away.What do you think about this?
[I may have changed too much, but I hope this will help :) ]
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