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I prefer to travel with my friends, so if I had this oppotunity with $10 000, I would like to go abroad with my family to Maldives and we will have been spending time there for 7 days together. Maldives is the heaven for me, but I know it is too expencsive, so I don't afford it now. I live in Miscow and the weather in March here is awful, there is no sun at all. I often look at photos in Instagram and I am a bit jealeous to people who are having a rest in some beatuful places.
In Maldives we would be relaxing, swim, have a great seafood meals, dive into the sea. It would be great and unforgetable.
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I prefer (like?) to travel with my friends??, so if I had this oppotunity with $10 000, I would like to go abroad with my family to Maldives and we would spend 7 days there together.Maldives is the heaven for me, but I know it is too expensive, so I can't afford it now.
I live in Moscow?? , the weather in March here is awful, there is no sun at all.
I often look at photos in Instagram and I'm a bit jealeous of people who are spending their holidays in such beatiful places.
In Maldives we would be relaxing, swiming, having great seafood meals, diving into the sea... and so on ( or etc.)
It would be great and unforgetable!
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