my first practice for IELTS task 1

The changes for Japan’s tourists travelling abroad tourists over a period of 10 years are shown by the bar chart, while the line graph shows the trend of percentage of Japan’s tourists going to Australia.

(After reading a description of chart 1, I cannot describe without thinking about it so I skipped chart 1.)

On the other hand, two slight reductions decrease in the percentage of Japanese tourists going to Australia respectively happened in 1988 and 1993 respectively, while the other years were up sloping on the line graph. Unfortunately, we do not know the exact time it took for the percentage to rise from 0 percent to 2 percent.

When we take a look at both charts at the same time, we can get a cross information by the number from chart 1 one times the percentage from chart 2 two, which is the number of Japanese tourists who travelled to Australia.

Note: In the last paragraph, I changed the numbers written in words to those in numerals, because in the beginning you had referred to the charts being numbered as 1 and 2. Therefore, this helps avoid confusion.