When was the first time when I felt grown up? I can't say that I was prepared to live on my own, but I had no choice. Unfortunately, when I started live in a dormitory, conditions weren't so good, but

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Irina

When was the first time when I felt grown up? I can't say that I was prepared to live on my own, but I had no choice. Unfortunately, when I started live in a dormitory, conditions weren't so good, but it didn't matter. More important thing was relations between me and my roommates. They were older than me and they weren't interested in studying at all. Maybe they thought I was so bored person so it was necessary to argue with me. It annoyed me very much but that was the first time when I felt grown up. My parents were far away from me, so I need to solve that problem as I could. I really suffered from that situation. My parent found how to help me later and I moved in a different place, but it was unforgettable time in my life. I was very grateful my parents could help me, but I've decided that I wasn't a little girl so I need to find solutions myself.

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When was the first time when I felt grown up?

A lot of children want would like to grow up quickly because they think that consider if they are a children they can't make a decision as children, they need listen to their parents and so on. In my experience opinion, my childhood was so happy so I didn't understand why some friends wanted to be older than they were.

Actually, As I don't haven't got have any some brothers and sisters, so my parents were was looking/looked after me as much as they could. Of course, it annoyed me sometimes because I thought they were always controlling me and my life. I was a little bit shy and I didn't have to face to real problems and didn't have to) make any decisions decide them.
After my graduation from (?did you mean, e.g. high) school I had an opportunity to move in Moscow. Although my parents didn't want I will have left me to leave them, but they knew the best Russian universities was were located in Moscow.

I corrected only the first part of your entry, because the text is very long and the system does not allow more than 5000 characters.

I hope this helps

When was the first time I felt grown up?

I can't say that I was prepared to live on my own, but I had no choice. Unfortunately, when I started living in a dormitory, conditions weren't so good, but it didn't matter. More important was the relationship between my roommates and I. They were older than me and they weren't interested in studying at all. Maybe they thought I was such a boring person that it was necessary to argue with me. It annoyed me very much, but that was the first time I felt grown up. My parents were far away from me, so I needed to solve the problem as best I could. I really suffered from that situation. My parents found a way to help me later and I moved into a different place, but it was an unforgettable time. I was very grateful that my parents could help me. However, I decided that I wasn't a little girl any more, so I needed to find solutions myself.

Irina, this is an interesting notebook entry and I'd like to help by correcting it. Unfortunately, the system does not allow for texts longer than 5000 characters, and all the corrections take up space. it would work better if you split the text into two parts, or shorten it.

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