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i was chosen as a master of ceremony in japanese day festival and these are my complaint last day i was so tired been a master of ceremony in japanese festival. it held more than 12 hours under the very hot sun and the dazzling shine. it made my skin becomes darker now. couldn't help! yesterday made me got hard headache and i was sooo dizzy. umm.. and also my face. its totally becoming more dirty because of the dust on that day. i hate this.. it increases the acnes on my face, and no doubt, my face isn't in good looking at all.. maybe that's all for today and thank you

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iI was chosen as a master of ceremonyies in for a jJapanese dDay festival, and these are my complaints.

last dayYesterday iI was so tired, after having been a master of ceremonyies in for a jJapanese festival. iIt held went on for more than 12 hours under the very hot sun and the in dazzling shine glare. iIt made my skin becomes darker now. , which I couldn't help! yYesterday made me got get a hard headache(1) and iI was sooo(2) dizzy. uUmm... and also my face. iIt's totally becoming It became more very dirty because of the dust on that day yesterday. iI hate this... it increases the acnes(3) on my face, and no doubt, my face isn't in good looking at all...  maybe that's all for today, and thank you.

1) "bad headache" is the phrase more commonly used

2) not strictly proper English, but very commonly used

3) "acne" is the skin condition, and so is singular

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