If you...
if you know my day routine and every thing about me ...you are a friend!
if you know what I love and hate ...you are my sister!
if you make what I hate ...you are my enemy!
If you thought that you know me ... you don't know me at all!
( I barely know myself :D )
if you care about me ..I care about you!
if you don't care ...I don't!
if you hate me .. I don't care!
if you love me ..I appreciate that a lot!
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If you...
If you know my daily routine and every thing about me ...you are a friend!If you know what I love and hate ...you are my sister!
If you do what I hate ...you are my enemy!
If you think that you know me ... you don't know me at all!
( I barely know myself :D )
If you care about me ..I also care about you!
If you don't care ...Neither do I!
If you hate me .. I don't care!
If you love me ..I appreciate that a lot!
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Hi Asmaa,
I hope this helps. I made some changes and highlighted them in yellow. Not all of them were needed, but I think they make it sound better. I also changed the letter "i" to a capital letter at the start of each sentence!
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