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I know it can be a little tedious but Could you give me hand with my presentation? I am a motivated electronic engineer with a passion for technology. I have experience in oil industry as a result of my international experience in many places at Mexico and Latin America. I started working as electronic technician with an excellent academic and professional formation in repair and maintenance on electronic sensors. I have built and implemented successful two new repair maintenance shops for electronic sensors used in oil industry in two countries. I consider myself responsible, creative, with initiative, I think I accept with pleasure the challenges and goals that organization could assign me. I love to fix things and find the root cause. I really got used to working under high pressure, so as to solve problems efficiently and achieve the goals set by the company and my work group. My desire is to keep developing my career helping and giving the best of me. I really want to thank you for your help!!!!

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I know it can be a little tedious but could you give me hand with my presentation?

I am a motivated electronic engineer with a passion for technology. I have experience in the oil industry as a result of my international experience in many places in Mexico and Latin America (Wikipedia counts Mexico as part of Latin America - perhaps you mean to say Mexico and South America instead).

I started working as an electronic technician with an excellent academic and professional foundation (or preparation)  in repair and maintenance on electronic sensors.

I have successfully built and implemented two new repair and maintenance shops for electronic sensors used in the oil industry, in two countries.

I consider myself responsible and creative, with initiative. I eagerly accept the challenges and goals that an (or your) organization would assign me.

I am adept at repairing equipment and finding the root cause of failures ("fixing things" wasn't clear - so I guessed at what you meant). I am used to working under high pressure so as to solve problems efficiently and achieve the goals set by the company and my work group.

My desire is to keep developing my career while helping and giving the best of me (maybe better: contributing to the success of a team) 

I really want to thank you for your help!!!!
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I know it can be a little tedious but could you give me hand with my presentation? 

I am a motivated electronic engineer with a passion for technology. I have experience in the oil industry as a result of my international experience in many places within Mexico and Latin America.

I started working as an electronic technician with an excellent academic and professional formation ('formation' works, but 'foundation' might fit better)  in repair and maintenance on electronic sensors.

I have built and implemented two new successful repair maintenance shops for electronic sensors used in the oil industry in two countries.

I consider myself responsible, creative, and intuitive.  I accept with pleasure the challenges and goals your organization could assign me.

I love to fix things and find the root cause. I really got used to working under high pressure, so as to solve problems efficiently and achieve the goals set by the company and my work group.

My desire is to keep developing my career helping and giving the best of me.

I really want to thank you for your help!!!!


It is very well written! I just made some changes to make it more grammatically correct and small changes to make it flow a bit better.  

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"I love to fix things and find the root cause." i would take that part really away. You're welcome.

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