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Korea's standard quality of service is much higher than any other developed country in the world and it is provided at a lower price. High quality for low cost is the main reason why you may argue that Korea is a good place to live. But one thing you must consider is the fact that the low cost of living is mainly a result of sacrifice on the part of the Korean workforce. Despite their highly trained skills, most of Koreans are employed for overly long working hours and humble wages that make it difficult to raise a family. As a result, younger generations are putting off marriage, and if they do marry, they delay having children due to a low expected future income.
(your English is very good and your meaning was very clear. I have only changed some of your phrasing to make it cleaner.)
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