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Because our life is getting worse indeed. *This is what I translated from one of comments on the web against a criticism of people complaining about their country referring it as 'Hell Korea.' I wanted to say that if so many people in a society are crying for pain, we should take care of them and try to remove the reason that made them cry, not asking them to stop or forcing to stop. It is natural that people visiting from other countries especially from developed ones with higher prices will be satisfied at affordable living cost in Korea. But the fact is that it is attributed to exploited large workforce. ... Korea's standard quality of service is much higher than any other developed countries in the world and it is provided at even lower price. High quality for low price is the main reason why you argue that Korea is a good place to live. But one thing you must concern is a fact that the low prices are mostly realized with Korean employee's sacrifice. Despite their highly trained skills, most of Koreans have to work too long and hard for humble wage to raise a family. As a result, young generations are putting off their marriges and if married, they put off or forced to call off having a baby because of their low expected future income. ...

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Korea's standard quality of service is much higher than any other developed country in the world and it is provided at a lower price. High quality for low cost is the main reason why you may argue that Korea is a good place to live. But one thing you must consider is the fact that the low cost of living is mainly a result of sacrifice on the part of the Korean workforce. Despite their highly trained skills, most of Koreans are employed for overly long working hours and humble wages that make it difficult to raise a family. As a result, younger generations are putting off marriage, and if they do marry, they delay having children due to a low expected future income.


(your English is very good and your meaning was very clear. I have only changed some of your phrasing to make it cleaner.)

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