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Could someone kindly correct it? Being famous as a film star has both andantages and disadvantages. Do you agree? Although being famous is fashionable, it carries a lot of negative things. Surely on one hand you have, from the outside, a wonderful lifestyle and a great media attention, but these could not be as you expect it. Often stars do not have what we think it is a wonderful life because they have problems having privacy due to the attention the media have on them. This cause them real life problems, infact many famous people, often, are not able to carry on their shoulders all that media-pressure and have alchool or drug dependance. I think, to be clear, that being famous has some advantages. Firstly you can be an example for other people and see them trying to imitate you, in other words you could have a sort of social influence and that is a good thing if you're thoughtfull. Second of all often being famous is often related to being rich, this do not buy you happyness but it could surely help, a lot. In conclusion being famous, as everything in life, is a trade-off among aspects of life that everyone of us see in different ways, so there is not a unique,right, choice to make.

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Could someone kindly correct it?

Being famous as a film star has both advantages andantages and disadvantages. Do you agree?

Although being famous is fashionable, it carries a lot of negative things. Surely on one hand you have, from the outside, a wonderful lifestyle and a great media attention, but these could not be as you expect them it.
Often stars do not have what we think it is a wonderful life because they have privacy problems having privacy due to the media attention the media have on them. This cause them real life problems, infact   Many famous people have problems in real life, often, are not able to carry on their shoulders all that media-pressure and have alcohol alchool or drug dependence dependance.
I think, to be clear, that being famous has some advantages. Firstly you can be an example for other people and see them trying to imitate you, in other words you could have a sort of social influence and that is a good thing if you're thoughful thoughtfull. Second of all often being famous is often related to being rich, this do not buy you happiess happyness but it could surely help, a lot.
In conclusion being famous, as everything in life, is a trade-off among aspects of life that everyone of us see in different ways, so there is not a unique,right, choice to make.

Well done. Both sides of idea are very clear, and there is some typo error only.

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