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Please help me modify the email Dear Adam, How have you been ? Hope things are winding down for you well. I have been staring my military services when I back to Taiwan.Now I become a member of Marine Corps Air and Defense and Garrison Group. Our daily mission is to defend and protect Navy base.Sometimes we can do the shooting training. Although we do the intensive training everyday but we have a little spare time to do your own things like using your smart phone or reading.I would like to see photos when I taught in New Zealand.Children's smile give me courage to faces challenge and I have great memories of being a teacher with school's name family. Soon the military services will be finished on the 10 of September. Wish you all the best. Sincerely yours Oliver

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Please help me modify the email

Dear Adam,

How have you been? Hope things are winding down for you well.

I have been started my military services when I came back to Taiwan.Now I am become a member of the Marine Corps Air and Defense and Garrison Group. Our daily mission is to defend and protect the Navy base. Sometimes we can do the have shooting training in shooting ranges.

Although we do the have intensive training every day, but we have a little spare time to do your own things like using our your smart phone or reading.I would like to see photos that I have taken when I taught in New Zealand. Children's smiles give me courage to face challenges and I have great memories of being a teacher with school's name family.  (Not sure what you mean)

Soon, the my military services will be finished end on the 10 of September.

Wish you all the best.

Sincerely yours,
Oliver


Hi Chong-Yu, 

There is a difference between "everyday" (an adjective that describes a common occurrence) and "every day" (which means each single day). Well written and I wish you all the best!

Cheers, 
Lance

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Please help me modify the email

Dear Adam,

How have you been ? Hope things are winding down for you well.

I have been started my military services when I returned back to Taiwan. Now I am become a member of the Marine Corps Air and Defense and Garrison Group. Our daily mission is to defend and protect the Navy base. Sometimes we have target practice. can do the shooting training.

Although we do the intensive training everyday but we have a little spare time to do your own things like using your smart phone or reading.I would like to see photos of when I taught in New Zealand. The children's smiles gave me courage to faces challenges and I have great memories of being a teacher with school's name family. ??

Soon the military services will be over, finished on the 10 of September.

Wish you all the best.

Sincerely yours
Oliver

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