Boracay Island in Philippines 2 Every time I go through a strange(weird) slope when I lived in The Sun Garden Hilltop Resort，so I tried to find another hotel.Until I moved in Ocean Breeze Inn，I feel l

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Boracay Island in Philippines 2 Every time I go through a strange(weird) slope when I lived in The Sun Garden Hilltop Resort，so I tried to find another hotel.Until I moved in Ocean Breeze Inn，I feel like the whole journey is starting to get lucky.It is a family hotel, the owner is very hospitable and helpful, let me feel warm.After moving in, I got closer to the beach and I met a big turtle when i diving in the sea,so happy.I think it's unnecessary to spend too much money on accommodation.Just be safe and clean is enough.Sometimes... live in the family hotel can experience the local customs and practices more than five-star hotel stay.And the beautiful scenery needs to go out, there is no need to stay in the room for a long time. I feel happy every day in Boracay.Diving during the day and searching for the Turtles.The late afternoon enjoy the sail sunset on the beach.Towards evening the happy hours,you can listen to the music and dance with the aboriginal,their music is very special.When you listen to a lot of metal instruments, and occasionally listen to the music of the indigenous style, will have different a flavor. Boracay has many unforgettable activities...For example, Arieks point jumping into the sea、Diving、through the jungle、Kitesurfing...and many many~~~ haha One （←can i use "two"）of my most memorable is the sunset of Boracay.And ...a local child gave me flowers.I can feel the child's sincerity and friendliness.Because the child's sincerity makes the flowers look exceptionally beautiful. Sometimes a stranger's smile can bring great warmth.Found a long-lost emotion in strange place.I love travel.

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Boracay has many unforgettable activities...For example, Arieks point jumping into the sea at Arieks point, Diving, going through the jungle, kitesurfing...and many many others~~~ haha

One （←can i use "two" Yes!）of my most memorable moments is the sunset of Boracay. And ...a local child gave me flowers. I can could feel the child's sincerity and friendliness. That does sound lovely, what a nice memory!. Because of the child's sincerity makes the flowers looked exceptionally beautiful.

Sometimes a stranger's smile can bring great warmth. I found a long-lost emotion in strange place. I love travel.

Very long, so I had to make two corrections. I've never been to Boracay, but the Philippines is lovely! I'm glad you had such a nice trip!

Be careful to make sure you use tenses consistently. If a sentence is in the past, the main verb of each clause will be in the past, too. Also, be careful to add -ing to verbs when they are the subject of a sentence and don't forget to add yourself as the subject of some sentences.

In English, we don't use "happy" as often as people do in China. Try a different word like "excited" or "amazed."

Boracay Island in Philippines 2

Every time I go through a strange(weird) slope ?? when I lived in The Sun Garden Hilltop Resort, so I tried to find another hotel. Until Once I moved in to the Ocean Breeze Inn, I feel felt like the whole journey is was starting to get lucky. It is a family hotel, the owner is very hospitable and helpful, let me feel warm and she gives me a warm feeling. After moving in, I got closer to the beach and I met a big turtle when i was diving in the sea; I was so happy. I think it's unnecessary to spend too much money on accommodation. Just be finding somewhere safe and clean is enough. Sometimes... living in the family hotel I can experience the local customs and practices more than during a five-star hotel stay. Of course, that's the idea! And you need to go out to see the beautiful scenery needs to go out, there is no need to stay in the room for a long time.

I feel happy every day in Boracay. :) Diving during the day and searching for the turtles. In the late afternoon I enjoy the sail sunset on the beach. Towards evening the during happy hours, you can listen to the music and dance with the aboriginal people; their music is very special. How so? When you listen to a lot of metal electronic? instruments, and occasionally listen to the indigenous music of the indigenous style, it will have a different a flavor.

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