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I'm on a diet. I wanna lose weight by 3 kilograms, so I try not to eat so much, and to exercise more often. But I have usually failed to stand to eat. I wish I could lose weight more easily.

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I'm on a diet.

I wanna want to lose weight by 3 kilograms of body weight, so I try not to eat so much food, and to exercise more often. But Unfortunately, I have usually failed to stand to eat less food. I wish I could lose weight more easily.

上手です。

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I'm on a diet.

I wanna (slang) lose weight by 3 kilograms (1), so I try not to eat so much and to exercise more often. But I have usually failed to stand to eat less (2). I wish I could lose weight more easily (3).


1. To sound more natural, we normally say by when. i.e. "I wanna lose 3 kilograms by the end of this month."

2. If you want to try a more advanced sentence, you could say "But I usually give into temptation and start to eat."

3. "I wish there's an easier way to lose weight."

ほとんど大丈夫だと思う。緑色は、訂正じゃなくて別の書き方で書いてみた。ダイエットは健康にあまりよくないんだから無理をしないでね。頑張ってね!

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You reminded me of using "I can't help". I can't help eating sweets whenever I see some.
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I agree strongly that whenever you see snacks you can't help eating. Neither can l especially when I see my family eating cookies and it smells. But the most fascinating food for me is bread. I can eat a lot of bread at a time and it makes me gain weight.
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I'm on a diet too. It's not easy to lose weight. I quit eating snacks, but whenever I see chocolate or biscuit, I can't endure eating one.

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