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Live and learn Dear friends, please, advice how to make this text more complex, closer to an advanced level. Thank you all. Today I have watched a German movie without any subtitles. It was a special showing organized by Mayakovskaya Library in Saint Petersburg. In this place many events on learning foreign languages are held, and it was my first time when I took part in it. This movie called “Robert Zimmermann Is Tangled Up in Love” is a comedy about youngsters and adults going through different life experiences and love stories. Also, the soundtrack is incredible – you can even listen to the songs of Vladimir Vysotsky there! Not many people came to watch the movie, and, unexpectedly, almost all of them were over 50 years old! They were very interested in the story, and they laughed at all jokes. Also, I met a pleasant woman who learns German to visit her daughter in Berlin. They live far away from each other and see themselves rare. I will definitely visit such events again – it differs from watching a movie at home or in the cinema, and it is a good chance to meet people of different ages and have exciting conversations with them.

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Live and learn

Dear friends, please, advice how to make this text more complex, closer to an advanced level. Thank you all.

Today I have watched a German movie without any subtitles. It was a special showing organized by Mayakovskaya Library in Saint Petersburg. In this place many events on learning foreign languages are held, and it was my first time when I took part in it.
This movie called “Robert Zimmermann Is Tangled Up in Love” is a comedy about youngsters and adults going through different life experiences and love stories. Also, the soundtrack is incredible – you can even listen to the songs of Vladimir Vysotsky there!
Not many people came to watch the movie, and, unexpectedly, almost all of them were over 50 years old! They were very interested in the story, and they laughed at all jokes.
Also, I met a pleasant woman who learns German to visit her daughter in Berlin. They live far away from each other and seldom see each other.
I will definitely visit such events again – it differs from watching a movie at home or in the cinema, and it is a good chance to meet people of different ages and have exciting conversations with them.
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