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Passenger Movie Part 3 So what was it? The capsule was designed by I-don’t-know-who as a bed for sleeping passengers. The passengers must sleep for about 120 years, or until they reach new planet which they meant to go. It was only the first 30 years when it happened (I mean, the clash with meteorites). I bet, whomever who likes to sleep, would like to join this spaceship. Imagine, 120 years of full sleeping, it is a marvelous idea for sleepaholic. Back to the story, the capsule which was broken belonged to one engineer. A low class engineer. He wasn’t so lucky. I am sorry, low class in that spaceship, are the same in the low class in our society. It is interesting, though, they have such a social range even in spaceship. The one who are in upper class get more privilege, facility and so forth. Reversely, the one who are in low class get less privilege, without any doubt.

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Passenger Movie Part 3

So what was it? The capsule was designed by I-don’t-know-who* as a bed for sleeping passengers. The passengers must sleep for about 120 years, or until they reach their destined new planet. It was only in the first 30 years when it happened (I mean, the clash with meteorites). I bet, whoever who likes to sleep, would like to join this spaceship. Imagine, 120 years of full sleeping; a sleepaholic's dream.
Back to the story, the broken capsule belonged to one, low class, engineer. He wasn’t so lucky. I am sorry, but low class in that spaceship is the same as low class in our society. It is interesting, though, they have such a social range even in the spaceship. Those who are in upper class get more privilege, facility and so forth. Contrarily, the ones in lower class get less privilege, without any doubt.

*i like the name!

Very well written!

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Passenger Movie Part 3

So what was it? The capsule was designed by I-don’t-know-who as a bed for sleeping passengers. The passengers must sleep for about 120 years, or until they reach new planet they are going to. Only 30 years had passed when it happened (I mean, the collison with meteorites). I would bet that whomever likes to sleep would like to join this spaceship. Imagine, 120 years of full sleeping, it is a marvelous idea for a sleepaholic.
Back to the story. The capsule which was broken belonged to one engineer. A low-class engineer. He wasn’t so lucky. I am sorry, the lower class in that spaceship was the same as the low class in our society. It is interesting, though, they have such a social range even in the spaceship. The ones who are in the upper class get more privileges, facilities, and so forth. Reversely, the ones who are in the lower class get fewer privileges, without any doubt.

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