today's weather
Today is very cold. The weather forecast calls for snow this afternoon. Now it is cloudy. Sometimes the weather forecast is accurate, sometimes not. Maybe it will be the last snow in this winter. Spring is coming. We look forward to it. The warm weather and fresh air, children could play outside. Everything will rouse up from sleeping.
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Today's weather
Today it is very cold. The weather forecast calls for snow this afternoon. Now it is cloudy. Sometimes the weather forecast is accurate, sometimes not. Maybe it will be the last snow of the winter. Spring is coming. We look forward to it. The warm weather and fresh air, children can play outside. Everything will rouse up from its sleeping.Very well written!
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Today's weather
Today is very cold. The weather forecast calls for snow this afternoon. Now it is cloudy. Sometimes the weather forecast is accurate and sometimes not. Maybe it will be the last snow of this winter. Spring is coming. We look forward to it. The warm weather and fresh air means children could play outside (把两个不完整的句子连城一个完整的句子）. Everything will rouse up from its sleeping. ("Everything will be roused from its sleep"会流畅一点)Want to progress faster?
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